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Love

"Absolutely awesome. What a stunning book. Feelings, love and growth. Each character’s story beautifully painted. Enjoyed reading this book so much. Love your writing style. Awesome writer❤️ "

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Willowhaven Hearts

"Love it! Full of life, drama and colour. Ren and Nalani were the "balm" for one another. It is amazing that, without restrictions and prejudices, a tiny pin prick to the heart can make life so beautifully glorious. You are writing fabulously about a long-time dream of mine ...love without borders of ethnicity, culture, class etc. Your passion and love shines on every page. I am so extremely proud of YOU! Always P.S. Ch 53 Ren - "She is min.""

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Emotional

"This was my first time reading this author. I really enjoyed this story. I could feel the emotions the main characters felt and the struggles they went through. The author did a great job showing the growth they experience and how it affected them and their relationship. Could use a little proofreading but nothing that caused too much distraction from the story for me. Great job!"

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