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beautiful

"I loved this book, it was sad, emotional, and relatable. I really liked the poem 'friends'. I think that one was my favorite! I hope you write more poems! Thank you for writing this book!"

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Beautiful Words.

"What a remarkable book. Wonderful poems. I can relate to some. Thank you for this amazing book. "

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what can I truly say

"your style of writing with the poems is very interesting the way you seem to bring emphasis to certain words and lines in the poem, I definitely could feel the emotion coming out of it and I definitely relate to them on a personal level. please don't stop writing!"

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Very creative

"Very creative. I would like to feature your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is alright by you then please email me at exzordersplrwso AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks. Only 50 spots are left. Mark"

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Love it

"Love it. I want to promote your Inkitt book for free to my list of newsletter subscribers. If that is ok with you then please email me at exzordersplrwso AT gmail.com to book your spot, thanks."

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Amazing

"Honestly, it's awesome! Double thumbs up!"

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Here's to Odd Dreams and Petty Things

"I love the title. I have only read two chapters and I like the range of topics you cover. My main problem is that you seem to use the same form for the poems. It is always rhyming couplets. There are so many different forms you could experiment with like Haiku, Sonnet, Pantoum, Villanelle. I only learned this recently on a free course called FutureLearn 'How to make a Poem'. I recommend it. Keep on writing."

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here is to odd dreams and pretty things

"I really liked one particular poem the " accidident". That is a good poem and the emotions are expressed very well."

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