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Great Short Story
"The characters were well done and the danger felt real. This story really hit home as an older sister, how Zan dealt with his little sister. This is the moment when a child becomes an adult, when responsibility is thrust upon them. When reality smacks you down from your thoughts of self centeredness and shows you that there is a lot more than whether you want to carry a heavy bucket or not. Well done my friend. :)"
Zan saves the day!
"I loved the characters, particularly Zan, who seems really good at problem-solving, which is a good thing, because he's going to need all of his wits about him to solve problems this adventure hands him."
