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Mind-blowing and Unsettling!

"Just finished the first chapters of "Subconscious", and wow, I'm hooked. The idea of your own mind taking over your body is terrifying in the best way possible. The shifting perspectives between Ernest, his creepy-calm "subconscious", and his ruthless girlfriend Heather are genius. You get this triple-layered view of the same messed-up situation. It's not just a sci-fi thriller; it makes you think about control, love, and what it really means to be human. Is becoming "perfect" worth losing yourself? The writing is sharp and pulls you right in."

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