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When we kick in love

"Absolutely beautiful story. Lorenzo and Kai are soulmates. Your writing Was so heartfelt. Thank you "

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"Everything, from the plot to the plot twist and to the way they fell in love and conquering the dynamics of sports and gay men and the community around them. It was truly heartfelt, loved this ❤️❤️"

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Loved it

"What a wonderful story, it was short but it didn't need to be longer, the author captured the intensity and emotion of the whole thing so well in every chapter. I really enjoyed it, a story of love over adversity, well written and leaves you with a warm feeling. Brilliant."

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