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Nice story
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A Promising Start ♥️
"I can see that you’ve put a lot of thought into the story, and there are definitely some interesting ideas here. ❤️ I did struggle a little with understanding some parts of the chapters, especially when the scenes or events changed, so I sometimes had to reread certain paragraphs to figure out what was happening. I think with a little more work on the sentence structure, grammar, and transitions between scenes, the story could become much easier to follow. I’ll definitely be curious to see how it develops as you continue revising it. ❤️"
