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The Other Brother

Summary

A boy named Jimmy finds a big secret in his basement...

Genre
Mystery
Author
Patrick
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

The Confusion

Jimmy looks at a picture of the family, and smiles, until he sees a shadow in the picture, he looks closer, it doesn't look like anyone he has seen before. "Max! Look at this!" Jimmy calls out to his brother. Max comes over and takes a look at the shadow, he doesn't know who it is either. They both look at each other in confusion. They make it their mission to find out who that is. They start at the location where the picture was first taken, near the basement door. They look for anything, anything that might be a clue, but... nothing. They ask their mom about it, but she starts stuttering, and pretends she got a call, they're starting to get frustrated, they need to find out what is going on. They go to the most obvious location to look for next: Inside the basement. They twist the doorknob and push. The door opens with a squeal, they go down the stairs, each step creaking under their weight. When they reach the bottom, their eyes widen in shock...

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