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That's pure and perfect romantic.

"It's short which is a bad thing, because it left you wanting more. A pure romantic moment between a couple. Highly recommended."

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"I liked it fine, you have talent for writing, but please don't make so many paragraphs. It might look cleaner, but people usually think it's the intelligence that shall not be named. Otherwise, you managed to get a lot in such a short story, so great job! I personally am not a fan of the daddy/babygirl stuff, but for everyone who is I highly recommend this!!"

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