163 chapters read
"I really enjoyed this story and now want to know what happens next and if there is more. I really enjoyed this author's longer story and the depth of this world. The characters are fleshed out, the pacing is good, and the world-building is excellent. "
158 chapters read
"I didn’t like Mirage, and he didn’t deserve to have a daughter or his mother. I would have liked to read more. I wanted her to meet a powerful, wealthy, handsome lycan hybrid who is more powerful than Mirage and who loves his daughter as his own and her mother. Now, that would have been really interesting to read. Please add more. "
5 chapters read
"The plot of this story is quite unique, unlike anything I've read before which is quite a difficult task to accomplish when there are so many werewolf books out there. The main character is very admirable, strong woman who is ready to do whatever it takes for the people she loves even if it means sacrificing her own well-being to do it. The hook in the first chapter is very effective of her saving the person she loves only for another person to take credit. What I found a bit confusing where jumps. Inside the same chapter one moment we were in one place with one character and the next we were in a complete new location so I feel like those transitions could be a bit polished up. Also, there are some grammar and spelling mistakes but nothing major. All in all, if you are into shifter romances with a dash of vengeance this might be the story for you because this is a different take on the trope that works really well. The MC is a strong, resilient woman so those who appreciate that will like this story. "
1 chapters read
"In My Luna’s Revenge (Blinded By Fury) Valeta introduces us to Viona who's one of the strongest and most resilient narrators I’ve encountered in recent paranormal‐fantasy romance. She donates a kidney to save her mate Nicolas, disappears under mysterious circumstances, is branded a criminal, and returns four years later to reclaim her story. The plot pivots on themes of betrayal, identity, justice, and second chances. (See the summary on Inkitt.) What works Viona's voice carries weight. Her suffering, sacrifice, and determination are all too real: we're in chains with her, in pain, in rage, and at last in action. The hook is compelling: she saved Nicolas, yet he thinks someone else did; the pack politics, the kidnapping, and fighting for the truth-instant tension and stakes. A blend of shifters/α-packs, romance, mystery, and vengeance gives it broad appeal for fans of fantasy romance and paranormal pack dramas. What I found less effective / areas for improvement At times the plot depends on familiar tropes-the "returning hero/heroine", "mate reunited", "secret betrayed" structure-which means parts of the story feel predictable. With 177 chapters, as listed on the page, the pacing can drag: some chapters rehash internal monologue or build suspense for long stretches; readers who prefer tighter narratives might feel the length. Characterization of supporting cast and world‐building sometimes take a back seat to the central revenge/romance arc; readers who crave deep lore or fully fleshed side characters may wish for a little more. My personal reaction Being a writer myself, I appreciated how the author doesn’t shy away from Viona’s emotional depth of her fury, her pain, her quiet moments of hope. It reminded me of how internal conflict can be driving external action. The “revenge” in the title isn’t about payback; it’s about the reclaiming agency and that resonated with me. On the other hand, I did find myself skimming through some of the slower chapters, ready for the forward momentum to pick up again. For whom is this book intended? If you're into: Paranormal romance-wolves/shifters/alpha packs Tales of second chances, sacrifice, and identity. Long-form serial reading where you can sink into the world for a while Then this book has a lot of what you’ll want. If you prefer shorter works or strongly plot‐driven fantasy with minimal romance detours, this might feel a bit sprawling. Overall rating I'd give it 3.5 to 4 out of 5 stars. It is strong on emotional stakes and character drive, a touch formulaic in places, yet a rewarding read for its target audience."
5 chapters read
"I like this story a lot. The author took the usual tropes —werewolf romance, a husband falsely accusing his wife of something, and reconnecting with his first love, a new girlfriend/wife tormenting the ex-wife —all the typical elements found in these kinds of books, but somehow makes it new and interesting. The story is pretty exciting, and I got into it immediately. That's good because I read a lot of this kind of werewolf romance, so it's great when I find something that manages to put a nice new spin on this type of story. The problems: There's a lot of confusing parts in this story. Like, one minute the main character is in a lab getting patched up by what she thinks is a mad scientist, then she's in her office doing paperwork for her pack, and I'm like "Huh? How did she get there? What happened to the doctor?" There's more confusing moments like that. <SPOILER ALERT>Like, one minute the MC gets humiliated by the new wife and her ex-husband, and then the next chapter you find out she DIED. I'm like, wait....how the heck did she die? She got slapped in the face and was fine and healing. Where did she die? I kept reading chapter 4 to see if they would explain it, but NOPE. No explaination.. Maybe I'm missing something, but it seems easy to miss things in this story. There were more holes and weird time skips. Also, some grammar and spelling mistakes. Overall, it's a great story, just a few things need to be explained more and fleshed out. But I would suggest anyone who likes werewolf romances to give this one a read. Especially if they want a little action in their romance story (which I do!)"