Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Parfait

"Énormément d'émotions sont transmises dans cette histoire. Pour le style d'écriture de cette histoire, on ressent légèrement l'écriture de l'IA à la fin mais pas trop donc ça passe. Un agréable moment."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Read this!

"If you love a good MM office romance, this is the book for you!! Highly recommend"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Great story

"I very very much enjoyed this story, it's well written, no hard sex scenes which do get a bit much in other stories, the characters are well explained and defined so you can visualise them really well. I also like that Adrian wins the battle over outdated and archaic attitudes about gay people, his personal struggle is handled sensitively, I'm sure a lot of people can identify with him. I love the character of Evelyn, she's a kind of glue that keeps Eli together, she should have her own story. Really enjoyed it, thanks 😀"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Sweet Romance... perfect for a night on the sofa.

"So, this is worth reading. It comes together in the end just like I like. I love a happy ending. The book doesn't have any sex, so if you like a softer male-male romance, one with a lot of heart, this is it! The book has emotion, all the feels and it's light on the heat. It will give you a full sense of satisfaction as the author ties up all the ends into a bow. I like how the author wrapped the whole story up and you do get to see both characters thoughts. Worth picking up."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
To Eli & Adrian 🥂

"It was worth the read. My patience was exercised, and the comeback from Adrian makes up for all the frustration. Definetely recommend this story or book. I will be checking out his other books too. Hopefully they are worth it just as this one. 🫶🫂"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Picky Reader

"it was... so and so. the first down was the lack of details, like the psychical description of the characters. Eli has blonde hair. that's it. and there are a few discrepancies, like, in one chapter, the author said that Adrian called and texted Eli for weeks and Eli didn't answer, and after that, he said he actually never called. I'm not trying to be mean. This is constructive criticism. Oh, and I'm not sure, but the writing style gives me AI vibes. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation