Chapter 1 : by the door way
One dark littl night a girl cald Lola was peeching throw the crac of the bedroom door. All of asuddn she heard the frunt door go she thout it was father Christmas but Lola thout rong...
It had his awfit on but his fase was pure black with white paches on his around his eys. Insted of sach of presonts it was a black bagh fild with dead bodys and galons and galons of fresh blood .Frirst i thowt it was a goce until he saw me !!!!
He grabd a nife and i fanted it made a loud bang but nobody heard this made me thinck are they the dead bodys in the black bahg my famoly. I
Woke up in a pure white room i thout it was heven but i am alweys a pane in my peronts bach side so i shud be in hell. I herd my peoronts calling my name Lola lola wace up your gowing to be latte fore school. I went doun stars fore brecfost i thout it was adreem althow i thowt rong the end...