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Beneath his ego

"Everything was great"

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Awesome

"A beautiful love story with lots of twists and turns! It has some funny moments also! But the love story is incomplete and we are waiting for the sequel!"

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My review

"I LOVE THIS BOOK! This is one of the best books I have ever read! I am very upset that Lana didnt find out from Aiden himself about the bet. I wish Caleb and Ruby were still together even though I understand her reason for ending things. I LOVE this book though tysmm for making it!"

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Greatt boooʻk

"like the plot twist with Aiden's father this is even more thrilling than I expected. just hope Aiden comes. clean before the beans are spilt and the milk.turns sour."

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Below his ego

"Dear writer your book is beautiful, once I started reading it I couldn't stop 👏👏"

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Love the plot

"This is so cool. I've never found myself hating and loving a character at the same time and it's driving me crazy! 🤣 Nice story line. I love the build up it's making sense and I can't wait for when Lana finds out an Aiden's bet. "

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A few flaws, but great plot

"There were a few spots in the early and middle chapters that you may want to correct. I would have marked them all for you, but I was sucked into the story. You have created great characters, but the story is becoming quite lengthy. I still can't wait, though, to see how this ends."

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Story about bullying and love

"All in all I really liked the story. The characters were interesting and mostly believable. At the beginning the writing style was kind of childish, but mostly it did improve over time. Especially the ending was writing very good. I liked the end of the story, everything else would have been unrealistic. Thank you very much for sharing and I am looking forward to book 2. "

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Beneath his ego

"This story is way too good I'm dying to know the next chapter and what happens !!!"

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