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Love it

"Love the story. It has a lot of depth and back stories are interesting. Can’t put it down, want to keep reading! "

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Very intriguing!

"I hope the next installment is in progress! It’s a great story, I’m quite invested. Compelling writing - I want to know how this turns out! Keep going, and great job so far. Definitely worth higher level publishing (and I can be picky). Keep up the great writing!"

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Nice read!

"Awesome read so far. I'm honestly a little confused  but I'm sure it'll start to make sense. It's a little drawn out, but I can't wait to see how it all plays out."

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Good story line

"Overall the story line is good. There are some unexpected twist, but also some cliche things too. Needs edited for basic things like pronouns and wording. If you can get past all that its a great story. Can't wait to read the last of it. At chapter 65 now and nothing else is posted, hope to get an ending soon. "

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The plot is good, the dialogue is well delivered, the characters are nice and most importantly the story relives the secret on time while maintaining the suspense.

"The plot is good, the dialogue is well delivered, the characters are nice and most importantly the story relives the secret on time while maintaining the suspense."

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Good holiday reading

"Easy reading, good strong storyline"

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The Forbidden Mate Wolf Academy

"The storyline was good. I’m invested, I need part 2. A few grammatical errors. "

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The forbidden mate

"More please"

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The forbidden mate at the wolf academy

"💯😎👍🖤💜🖤🖤💯"

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The Forbidden Mate

"Good plot. It holds the interest of the reader. Keep it going."

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Love it

"Amazing characters. Like a twilight but no vampires. "

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Human mate

"The storyline is okay only for Noelle's ignorance and not thinking of finding out more about her surroundings and stuff. It's taking too long. Grammar needs some proof reading. "

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Exciting

"Good plot with needed suspense and well written. It does not feel cringy or unstructured. Liking it till now. "

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I'm 90% sure this was AI written

"I didn't get super far so maybe I'm wrong but there are some super weird inconsistencies with the characters like they forgot what just happened in a previous chapter or just aren't making sensible conclusions, some interactions that get started just stop like a cliff hanger at the end of the chapter but don't pick back up in the next. But the line that did it in was "he dropped the PlayStation and walked over to me". He dropped the what now? Ai often struggles to have context for physical objects so this screams AI prompted writing. That's a big no thanks from me. "

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