Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Suspenseful and Mysterious

"I was concerned that she would forgive them immediately, especially Rowan. But I appreciate him keeping his distance. I enjoy the gradual build-up and pace you're keeping us at as we uncover more of her secret powers. I can't wait till she grows more confident and puts them in their place too. Also, I hope when the time comes Mara has her back. Enjoying this so much! Looking forward to the next chapter. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation