Raise the gates
A sharp burst of static from the radio at her hip shattered the stillness. A moment later, her earpiece crackled alive and Charly’s voice filled her head.
“Can’t pass through Benton today, Runner 8. Big horde of Zombs ahead. Don’t know what stirred them this early — sun’s not even down — but they’re lively today. Stay on Unity Road till you reach the Inn, then cut across to Gogan. Gogan’s quiet, so that part’ll be a piece of cake.”
With a small sigh, Eight followed his directions. She didn’t answer — Runners never did. The undead were drawn to noise, and even the faint crackle of her radio could turn silence into a death sentence. She catalogued his warning automatically — risk, detour, exertion — the way Clinton had wired into her from day one.
She adjusted the straps of her backpack and kept moving. The day had already stretched long, her legs aching from miles of uneven ground. She’d hoped to take the shortcut back to Clinton — not today, apparently.
Eight knew the terrain like the back of her hand. She hadn’t been one of the first Runners, but she’d joined early enough — around Day Sixty After. That was when she’d replaced the former Runner Eight, whose name nobody used anymore.
“After.” That was what they called it now. Nobody spoke of Before. It hurt too much. Before had been color and noise — streaming, TikTok, laughter spilling from open cafés. Grocery stores with fruit that didn’t come from a can. Cars that didn’t smell like old oil and fear. Doctors, hospitals, normal life.
Then came October 23rd, 2023 — the last announcement, the last calm voice on a government channel. After that, silence.
Once, Clinton had been a small but lively town. Now it was little more than a cluster of barricaded buildings along what used to be Pleasant Street. Sebasticook River curled around three sides of the settlement like a dark, protective arm. The only southern entry was walled off — reinforced steel and scavenged cars welded into a single, stubborn line. The gates opened only when absolutely necessary, sirens warning the entire city each time. Even a two-minute window could mean death. Clinton called it safety. Eight tried to believe them.
By the time she reached the old Inn, the light was slanting gold and thin across the road. She stopped for a heartbeat, scanning the treeline before veering north. The radio hissed again.
“Careful, Runner 8 — you’re about to leave the cameras,” Charly said, his tone calm but edged with concern. “See you on Gogan in a few!”
Eight gave a small nod no one could see. Being unwatched always felt strange. Clinton preferred its people in frame.
Staying on the road meant she’d remain visible to Clinton’s surveillance, but the shortcut would shave almost two miles off the route. She shifted the weight of her backpack, the straps cutting into sore shoulders. It was heavy with food and supplies — proof that the run had been worth it.
She pushed forward, her boots sinking softly into the loam.
The dirt felt better than asphalt — alive, forgiving. The air smelled of pine sap and damp earth, a clean contrast to the metallic tang of the city. She moved quickly, every step deliberate. Roads lied. Dirt never did.
The open field stretched ahead, bright with dying light. Good visibility. No cover. No ambushes.
The Zombs were dangerous, but slow. Even worn down from a day’s work, she could outrun any stray. Still, her eyes swept the horizon in steady rhythm with her breath. A crow startled from a fence post; she flinched, then relaxed again. Her body reacted before her mind did — reaction kept you alive.
Ahead, Gogan Road shimmered faintly under the fading sun.
“Runner 8 back on supervision,” Charly’s voice came through again as she crossed into range. She could hear the relief in his tone — and the familiar grin when he added, “Come on, Eight, hurry up! Dinner’s almost ready!”
Eight smiled despite herself. That was why she liked working with Charly. He cared — not in the official, procedural way some of the others did, but like someone who still remembered Before. He always found a way to joke, to make the silence less heavy.
She picked up her pace.
Shadows lengthened as the sun slid behind the trees. After another twenty minutes, she could see Clinton’s walls — a patchwork of steel, rust, and resolve — rising against the orange sky.
The first alarm echoed through the quiet fields when she was about two hundred yards out, its metallic wail slicing through the dusk. Then came the three words that never failed to tighten her throat:
“RAISE THE GATES!”
The speakers crackled, and the heavy machinery groaned to life.
She ran faster, boots striking against the dirt. The words had become a constant in her fractured life — the sound of safety, of another day survived.









There’s something profoundly human in your writing. You don’t just build characters, you unfold them. Their emotions, flaws, and little sparks of hope make the story feel heartbreakingly alive. It’s rare to see writing that captures both pain and beauty so effortlessly. This chapter in particular carried a quiet strength; it hit harder than I expected, and it stayed. You’ve created something that resonates on a soul level.
What a great first chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes
what a strong opening chapter! I felt like I was with 8 on the run. loved all the descriptions and how truly immersive it felt. I also love an apocalyptic story-something about real consequences makes me feel like an adventure is ahead, not something solely scary. looking forward to the book