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Pretty good

"This is a good book. The writing is pretty good. It’s very descriptive. The plot is good so far. I have enjoyed it a lot. I would recommend it to all my friends."

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Crush me Claim me

"Bloody great read - cannot wait to read the other books xx"

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Good job on the story

"I personally thought the characters were great and developed. So was the storyline! Keep up the good work! I am hope to read some more of your FREE stuff again! Though you might want to looks my stuff"

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Good book.

" Thank you author for your time to write this exciting book."

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A very good story

"I chose this rating because I actually liked the story. The grammar could be improved. I LOVED TORI!! I was hoping for a little character development of Heather, though."

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Gud story I wrote it ic

"I hate this rich kids yhoo ..but gud story Author well written 👋👌"

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ᴄʀᴜsʜ ᴍᴇ ᴄʟᴀɪᴍ ᴍᴇ

"ᴏᴍɢᴇᴇ ɪ ɴᴇᴇᴅ ᴍᴏʀᴇ ɪғ ᴛʜɪs... ʟɪᴋᴇ ᴡᴛғ ɪ ᴡᴀs sᴏ ɴᴏᴛ ᴇxᴘᴇᴄᴛɪɴɢ ᴛʜᴇ ᴇɴᴅ ʙᴜᴛ ᴛʜᴇɴ ᴀɢᴀɪɴ ɪ ᴋɴᴇᴡ sᴏᴍᴇᴛʜɪɴɢ ᴡᴀs ᴏғғ ᴡɪᴛʜ ʙʀᴀxᴛᴏɴ... ʜᴇ ᴡᴀs ᴛᴏᴏ ᴅᴀᴍɴ ǫᴜɪᴇᴛ... ᴜɢʜʜʜ ᴄᴀɴ ʏᴏᴜ ᴘʟᴇᴀsᴇ 🙏🥺🙏🙏 ғɪɴɪsʜ ᴛʜɪs sᴛᴏʀʏ ᴏʀ ᴀᴅᴅ ᴍᴏʀᴇ.... ɪ ɴᴇᴇᴇᴇᴅᴅᴅᴅᴅᴅ ᴍᴏʀᴇ 😊😊😔"

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College drama. More drama than a one shot

"College Poor secret daughter of a rich guy Mental Health Bullies I read the blurb that the author put at the front of this story and I expected the steamy action to happen fast. I was a little bit surprised at the length of the dramatic build up. There is a lot of deliberately immature teenage drama including characters who ‘crush’ on people, make jealous assumptions snd just generally act like hormonal unfiltered teenagers. This story includes some deep conversations about mental health, including suicidal ideation. The author does treat them with respect. 🤬 There is moderate level swearing used in conversation 🔪There is discussion of self harm, and incidents of bullying that causes mental trauma but do not cause long term physical damage. 💋 There is self love and sex scenes. These are moderately graphic. 🔚 This book is the first in a series, so it does leave you on a cliff hanger at the end. "

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Gossipy

"A little too much gossip. I know it's based in high school, but there's too much. Not enough depth."

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Crush me claim me

"I’m still reading, and like this read very much! "

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Je ne suis pas d’accord

"J’ai un problème avec l’utilisation des mots pussy et cock ... La fin ... non mais pardon ??? Comment on peut finir une histoire avec ce genre de twist ? Je ne lirais plus cette auteure si c’est pour me retrouver avec une fin comme ça ! "

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Überzeugt mich leider nicht

"Finde das Ende blöd und außerdem ist es für mich kein erotik. Ich meine sie schläft einmal mit jemanden (was für mich auch noch mehr beschrieben sein könnte)."

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Well I don't know what to say

"I want to be nice about all this. First of all, it's good that you finished the book, something I've failed to do with mine for years😂😂but that being said, a lot needs to be done with this book. It's not bad, but it's not good. She just randomly trusts people😂😂 the way the book was wrote doesn't show maturity of a writer, the grammar was ordinary and it was generally frustrating to read. BUT it is a good plot. Not trying to be mean but you really need to do a lot more work on this book. Anyways if you think I'm wrong then read it and see for yourself. But keep up the good work. Looking forward to it."

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What a pity

"It could've been good, it started well till chapter 4 but why is that girl so pathetic???? I'm out I can't... nah "

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Crush me , Claim me

"This story jumps around and comes off childish. Disappointing and doesn't flow."

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