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the cursed soul

This story contains themes of: depression

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Story Notes

it was at the dead of night and hanzo was walking in the dark outside alone with his thoughts

Summary

Hanzo is a teenager who carries an impossible secret — he’s over 4,000 years old. Cursed with immortality by a powerful witch long ago, he has wandered the earth for centuries, unable to die, unable to forget. Now living quietly in a small town in 2015, Hanzo keeps to himself, hiding his pain and his past. But when monsters and demons begin to plague the town, Hanzo refuses to intervene… until he meets Sakura, a 20-year-old woman who feels strangely familiar. When he looks into her eyes, memories from a forgotten life return — she bears the bloodline of the very witch who cursed him. As fate draws them together, Hanzo reveals his secret and offers her a deal: “If you learn the magic to lift my curse… I will protect this town — and you.” Reluctant but determined, Sakura agrees. As the two fight side by side against the dark creatures, their bond deepens. But the more Sakura learns about her ancestor’s magic, the more she discovers that breaking the curse may come with a terrible price — one that could destroy them both.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
Kaiden
Status
Complete
Chapters
21
Rating
4.8 (4 reviews)
Age Rating
16+

the deal remembered

The nextmorning came quietly over Ashvale. The early light spilled through the café windows, cutting across the wooden tables where Hanzo and Sakura sat. The same small café where they had first met had become their quiet refuge, though the weight of what they discussed was anything but peaceful.

Books, notes, and old pages were spread between them. The air smelled of coffee and dust.

Sakura’s brow was furrowed as she flipped through her family’s old journals. “Some of these go back hundreds of years,” she said. “My great-grandmother wrote about curses and spirits… but most of it reads like fantasy.”

Hanzo sat silently across from her, his fingers idly tracing the rim of his untouched cup. “It’s not fantasy,” he murmured. “Your family’s magic was real once. Very real.”

Sakura looked up at him, her expression torn between curiosity and disbelief. “And you really mean it? You’ve been alive for twenty thousand years?”

Hanzo gave a faint, humorless smile. “Alive isn’t the right word. Existing fits better.”

She leaned back, studying him. “If I can find the spell — the right one — to break your curse… you’ll protect this town?”

He looked out the window at the people walking by, the laughter of children echoing faintly in the air.

“A deal’s a deal,” he said flatly. “You lift the curse, I protect the town.”

Sakura nodded, but before she could respond, the ground trembled. The lights flickered. A deep, guttural roar rolled through the air, rattling the café’s windows.

Then came the screams.

People rushed past outside, panic spreading through the street.

Sakura jumped to her feet. “What was that!?”

Hanzo didn’t move. His eyes narrowed as he glanced out the window — smoke was rising near the town square. From within it, something enormous moved — a monster, its body a twisted shape of charred flesh and glowing veins, like molten rock brought to life.

“Another one,” Hanzo muttered under his breath. He stood, brushing off his coat. “It’s none of my concern.”

Sakura spun toward him, disbelief in her voice. “What do you mean, none of your concern? People are dying out there!”

He turned away. “That’s not my problem anymore.”

But as he took a step toward the door, she called out, voice trembling but strong.

“You said you’d protect this town! That was the deal, remember?”

Hanzo froze. For a long moment, the only sound was the chaos outside. Then he sighed, running a hand through his silver hair.

“…Right,” he said quietly. “The deal.”


The streets were burning by the time he arrived. Cars were overturned, and the air was thick with heat and smoke. The creature loomed above, roaring, its molten skin cracking and dripping fire with every movement.

Hanzo cracked his neck and flexed his hands. “You picked the wrong town.”

The beast lunged, claws slashing through the street. Hanzo blurred forward — too fast for the human eye — and drove his fist straight into the creature’s side. The impact sent a shockwave through the air, hurling the monster back through a row of buildings.

It screeched, recovering quickly, and swung its tail. The blow sent Hanzo crashing through a bus and into a wall. The ground shook as he stood back up, dust falling from his shoulders.

The monster roared again and charged. Its claws slammed through Hanzo’s chest, pinning him to the wall. Black blood spilled down his shirt — but his face didn’t even flinch.

He looked down at the claw impaling him, then up at the creature.

“Pain stopped mattering a long time ago.”

He grabbed the demon’s wrist, crushed it with inhuman strength, and ripped the claw free from his own body. Flesh and bone knitted back together before Sakura — watching from a distance — could even process what she was seeing.

But the monster wasn’t done. It swung its massive arm again — the edge of its claw sliced through Hanzo’s neck.

His head flew off, rolling across the pavement. For a heartbeat, everything went still.

Then, as the creature roared in triumph, flesh began to regrow. A new head formed from black smoke and light, bones and skin shaping in seconds until Hanzo’s calm face returned — eyes glowing faint blue.

He exhaled, cracking his neck again. “That the best you can do?”

The monster lunged once more. Hanzo met it halfway, his fists colliding with the creature’s chest in a shockwave that shattered nearby windows. The ground split beneath them.

When the dust cleared, the monster lay broken and lifeless in a crater, its body steaming and cracked open.

Hanzo stood over it, blood running down his arm — though the wounds were already closing. He looked down with something like boredom, then turned and walked away.


Sakura ran toward him through the smoke. Her eyes were wide, her face pale. “You—your head—it—”

Hanzo brushed past her, his tone calm but cold.

“I told you,” he said. “Nothing can kill me.”

Sakura stared at him, voice trembling. “That’s not living, Hanzo… that’s torture.”

He paused, just for a moment. “You’re not wrong.”

Then he walked away, leaving her standing in the ruins of what used to be Main Street — watching as the man cursed to never die disappeared into the fading smoke.

Let Kaiden know what you thought about this chapter!

Anastasiia
Anastasiia

Я не большой противник подобных историй. Я просто зашёл посмотреть, и сюжет мне очень понравился! Он очень закрученный.

a year
RachaelK99
RachaelK99

I really like your descriptions

a year
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