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Beyond the Kingdoms

"This book exceeded my expectations. The amount of description in every paragraph is amazing. The characters are well described. I love the indian element to it. It's very captivating. I can't wait to read more and I'm so excited for the chapters coming."

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Beyond the Kingdoms

"I have just one word WOW! A story of 5 stars! I will stay tune. "

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very intriguing

"I like the tone you are setting. the ideas are unique. It would be cool to see a little more world building, and if the characters were more fleshed out. Forgive me if this seems wrong too you, Maybe I am into an older style of fantasy writing. There is a lot of movement but more context would help me to visualize the world better. I totally get that the ideas come really fast! What I tend to do is get the stream of thought down, the story as it is coming and then go back and flesh it out...I look forward to reading more....thank you "

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