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La version Anglaise

"Cette traduction est trés bien dans son ensemble, mais differente de la version francaise sur certain aspect. Sinon sa va, ma petite amie a adoré! "

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Approvato

"The style is very poetic and is good for books with a mythological theme 👍. I can't wait for the world building to be expanded, because I think it has potential. "

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the mood is riviting...

"You have a great sense of the poetic, your use of language is beautiful. I am curious if you were planning to flesh it out more or are these first few chapters meant to be elusive? it reminds me of the verses in the ancient Greek Theogonies. A poetical treatise rather than a fiction story. Either way I look forward to more..."

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