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Inkitt Needs to Give Us the Rest

"I love ❤️ this author's work. Will be a happy camper when the rest of this one is released."

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Keep reading

"I’m am disappointed that I didn’t get to read all of it or did it just end? I’m a little confused "

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So impressed

"I’m hooked into the story! Great character build up... a handful of continuity gaffs, but I Can’t stop reading- I need to know what’s going to happen next."

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Really good story

"Fell in love with Kate and Seth Very well written Great story Very enjoyable- well done "

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Two

"Entertaining , sweet, colorful "

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Interesting story

"Enjoying the plot and the complexity of the characters. I love books with sports through them as it adds another level of depth to the story. Would definitely recommend reading this book. "

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Good book

"I wish the whole thing was here! It’s a good story, well written with great characters and story line! I highly recommend this!! "

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Some heartache can heal

"Nice story of how to overcome a bad childhood. Some people peak in highschool others in college but successful people continue to grow and develop into something special. Well told 😊"

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Broken Play

"This is very interesting and especially not so sexual for young adult. I really enjoyed seeing Seth grow and accept himself and how she didn't have to change anything about herself. Loved it."

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Nat

"Awesome book! Keep up the amazing work!"

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Good read

"This book is a slow build but I love the depth of the characters! "

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Just half of the story

"One should mark one's work as an excerpt for the half of the book. The plot was mediocre. "

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Not finished

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What a bummer ☹️

"Even though the chapters we do get to read here are very well written, I wouldn’t have bothered reading a novel I can’t finish - Such a shame, would have been nice to have been warned!"

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