What is your opinion?
Short chapters that make you think you have read a book...
"These chapters make you think you are reading short stories. While spicy they still contain enough story to make you think you are starting a book or part way through a good book. Beautifully written and compelling with their characters, I would like to see them expanded and turned into a full book."
A Pretty Good First Time
"The author is upfront about these not being proofread, and an opening to smut writing. With that being said, the overall stories are pretty good. Only minor spelling or grammar errors, a fun plotline for the one-off style of the chapters, and dialogue that feels in line with these characters... I'd say it's a pretty good first time. Overtime the author will develop more towards those skills and find a style of writing they feel fits it best. In my personal opinions I felt like the scenes were a bit fast paced, but that is more so personal opinion. I did like the to-the-point style for them all being one-off chapters as we go through different characters, it helped them all feel very contained and made it clear why we were here. I think over time if the author were to pursue this, they could make some pretty great strides if this is the early work! "
