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On the edge of my seat!

"Oh. My. God! I'm not sure what to say. This was... WOW!!! "

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Permanently Black and Blue

"Shaun and Jesse are everything to me. I absolutely adore Jesse. Shaun is a little rough around the edges, but a lot of that seems to be fear. He's gone through SO much. I love the way you depict the struggle with Shawn's mental health, too. I honestly felt that it was extremely realistic. Reading about a character that struggles with self-harm has been super interesting to me, especially since it's so rare! I can't wait to see where this story leads!!! I hope Shaun will be able to accept himself. Well, that and stop self-harm. Your writing, author, is absolutely phenomenal and sucks it's readers right in. "

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Weird, but good

"So sad, but still heartwarming"

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