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Spooky, But not Scary

"The descriptions of landscape and environment were lovely, and the characters were well-defined. I loved the dynamic between the sisters and the scariest thing of all: complicated friend groups. I do feel the story could have been darker or scarier, but the writer wasn't going for that angle. I respect that. There were a few grammar errors. Otherwise, a very good story. highly recommend it! "

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Approvato

"The writing style is simple and accessible to everyone, it could be recommended for reading to literally anyone👍♥️ (At first it reminded me of Fairy Oak 🥰) (Would you like to check out my book "la famiglia Sagrada"?)"

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Fun Story

"Fun story, well thought through."

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