What is your opinion?
Recommendation
"If you enjoy dark-fantasy stories with moral complexity, rebellions against power, and emotional character arcs — this story is worth your time. I would rate it around 7.5/10. With a bit more polish in pacing and character distinction, it could become a standout. "
The dusk rebellion
"Overall the plot and story idea is very imaginative and creative but there are a few points to consider to make your story even better than it is now! These are tips that I always stick true to and are very helpful! 1. vary punctuation - it keeps readers on their toes! 2. use paragraphs - it makes the story flow nicely for example you could focus one paragraph on describing the setting and then the next paragraph on the characters with a nice segue in between. 3. don't be afraid to use bigger vocabulary - show off what you know! 4. use a compelling story hook - one of my personal favourites is starting the book right in the middle of the action (media res) and then blending into their world or setting - like the Powerless series! 5. don't be afraid to look up words! I do it all the time lol and it's totally acceptable! 6. and my final one - don't let anyone's words put you down!!!! Only use them to make you better!"
