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What is your opinion?
Interesting plot twists
"Interesting plot twists. Interesting characters. Can't wait to see what's next."
Good reading
"Good and light reading"
His desire, Her Sin
"It's as if it hasn't been proofread. There are too many grammatical and spelling errors. BTW, it's the crook of her neck, not crock. There are errors about what tense is being used. It moves from 1st to 3rd person quie a bit. The story really needs to be read out loud to pick up the errors. Otherwise, it's a great story"
Entertaining
"Dragging abit bt plot is interesting...would appreciate more uummppphhhh"
