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Zerafina

"Brilliant Mafia story. Heartbreaking "

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OMG wow!

"I'm devastated that it ended like that! I could feel myself become the characters. Love this so much!"

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Finally

"Yes!!! She finally opened up to him......loved it!! Yo Dante is my boy, he cracks me up with his conversation with himself 🤣. I'm so glad he listened to her and I'm so freaking happy that she finally kiss her man YES go Zafrina"

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A Truly Captivating Read

"It feels different from other gangster stories as the ML does not force himself on the FL, which makes the story more respectful and refreshing. The characters are well chosen and fit their roles perfectly. The story is interesting and addictive, and the detailed writing makes every moment easy to imagine. It is definitely worth the time and a great read. Edit : Oh my goddd !!!! I'm in love with this story. Dante, Zafrina and Luigi are so sweet and funny. One of my favorite story. "

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Binge Worthy

"Every chapter left me wanting more. It was written beautifully!!!! Peace never lasts with these two; it's just SO GOOD. Characters are introduced smoothly, and we don't have any unnecessary characters. We don't have any random info dumps, so that's good. It's a very carefully constructed world, edging the line between reality and mafia fiction. Can't wait for more"

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Vowed to the devil

"Beautiful and well constructed with level of sustainable suspense."

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Vowed to the Devil

"Loved it. As always Muss has lived up to her reputation. Keep up the good work "

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Well written

"Although it's not a new story, it is well written. May try yi shorten some scenes. There is repetition in some of them "

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Brilliant story

"I love all your books muss "

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ANOTHER ONE!!!

"Another epic story from my girl, this one starts out tragically. Our fmc, Zafrina is In need of some support, I love the way that she is already starting to grow within the first few chapters and is doing so for the better. Our mmc, Dante is also experiencing some turbulence in his life and I'm looking forward to seeing where their union will go.Looking forward to a lot of plot, twist and turns along the way.It's a great read so far , excellent writing and excellent characters."

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Mesmerizing Plotline

"This story is interwoven with the authors other two books, but is as different as it is similar. Just getting started, but the plot is si intriguing, I couldn't put it down & read all night long the first seven chapters! Bravo 🌶 👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿"

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So excited! One of the best

"I'm so excited to finally be able to read this again. I'm so excited to see how their story will unfold 💕"

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Love it

"Great story plot. You become one with this story. Pain heartache hate raged and the love. "

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Devil

"This looks like it's going to be a heart breaking story 😭I don't know if I'm excited or scared to read "

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😩 ugh

"Ahhh another crazy cliffhanger lol ugh 😩 lol love it 🥰 obsessed "

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