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Vampire girl meets human boy

"Good story. It had mystery, an interesting plot twist, and a great ending. For me, this story moved slowly and didn't have the grappling intensity that I usually like and that's ok. All the pieces were there and well written. Great job. ❤️"

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Midnight Curves

"I enjoyed every single chapter!! Looking forward to reading more works of yours!!"

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midnight curves

"i really liked how you explained everything that happened and how the baseball game went i can really tell you took your time with this chapter you have a done a great job keep it up "

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