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What is your opinion?
Confusing
"Right now this book is to confusing. I will await revisions before attempting to read again.."
Unfinished, confusing, questionable sanity of female main character
"Right now, this book feels unfinished. The story is there. It's just buried under so many revised drafts and repetitive updates that it's extremely confusing to read. I hung in there, hoping it would clean up a bit, but no such luck. Also, if your heroine is supposed to be extremely clever, she comes off as arrogant and a whole lot of dense. I'm not sure she is worth the Alpha's efforts, but he is stuck with her, bloodline power and all that. Sympathies to the poor guy. "
