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Soul moving heart touching Love...

"Thank you for enriching my heart and Soul with this magical tale of Love and loss. Deep feelings permeate all of it. This is one of my favorite stories I have ever read. It reminds me of Philip Pullman's "His Dark Materials" trilogy in its intensity, multi dimensionality, profound wisdom, scope and its unwavering perseverance and Faith against all odds. Bravo! This is most excellent story weaving. I cried and laughed and felt...so much. This is one of those trilogies that one wishes would never end, because saying goodbye to all of these wonderful characters feels like a personal loss. I can see your language background is likely not English. So a good edit by a native or proficient speaker with great attention to detail would give your marvelous story its final polish. However, nothing takes away from the excellence of your exceptional story telling. Thank you for your precious gift and for having the courage and passion to share it with the world. 💖🙏🌹"

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Heart warming

"I cried I laughed it was wonderful ❤"

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amazing story

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