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"I really want to like this story. Reading the synopsis, it’s right up my alley. However, after a couple chapters, there have been several name changes, and it seems Marcus has changed careers a couple times from soccer midfielder to actor(mention of attending a Paramount meeting?) it got rather confusing. Writing style is great though, just confused. "

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