Running through time 🫆

" Your novel shows promise and potential, with an interesting plot and well-developed characters. The writing is engaging, and the story has some great moments. However, there are areas that need improvement, such as pacing, character development, and plot consistency.im not including my suggestion but I know you can do it and To take your novel to the next level, consider,Your dedication and effort are evident, and with persistence, your novel could become truly exceptional. "