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My heart aches...

"Wow, you sunk your hooks into me right from the start. As a guy, you made me want to jump on a plane, find this woman and tell her that I would gladly take over to mend her heart. This was emotional, powerful and resonated with me and how I cherish the passion between two lovers. That is what fuels my fire. This was a great poem and it will certainly get my brain working on another story outline. May I have permission to use this poem as the basis of a new love story? I am 100% a fan of yours. Great work! I look forward to reading more of your talents. -Thank you!"

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