Rohans Journey

"The feeling of humiliation of Rohan's comes across quite strongly. I can see myself in his role.. and the description of Derets physical equipment I found exciting and arousing..The longing of Rohans wife for a large virle man and cock was strong. They sisst feelings of Rohan come across.. but I thought it might add something for his fantasies to be explored when he's alone..and how he gets off when shes away with Derek. I look forwar to susequent chapters."