What is your opinion?
j'adore
"superbe histoire "
Rohans Journey
"The feeling of humiliation of Rohan's comes across quite strongly. I can see myself in his role.. and the description of Derets physical equipment I found exciting and arousing..The longing of Rohans wife for a large virle man and cock was strong. They sisst feelings of Rohan come across.. but I thought it might add something for his fantasies to be explored when he's alone..and how he gets off when shes away with Derek. I look forwar to susequent chapters."
Rohan's journey
"I'm going to genuinely try to be as constructive and thoughtful as I can, but this story and stories like genuinely make me sad and upset in almost every way. I reject this bigoted notion that "black" or "white" men are most dominant, imposing, confident, assertive or more in-charge than men from any other background, region, ethnicity or nationality. This is simply misinformation and confirmation bias for bigotry and ignorance to spread. But honestly, that's not what bothers me most about stories like this one (although it is significant and harmful). What actually bothers me the most is the idea that relationship dynamics like this are somehow good for couples. Let's actually reflect on what's happening here. These men, whether it's Rohan, Ajay or Jian, are not being given pointers, tips or visual guides on how to be better lovers and romantic partners to their wives. They're being told that they're physically inadequate to please and satisfy their wives. Which is why these women, Priya, Lei and Lila, must be satisfied by men who are more 'well-endowed, bigger' or "better in bed." The narrative is that these women deserve to be 'filled-up', this is very strange way of saying that couples don't have honest conversations about their needs in the bedroom. If you need to be better pleased sexually, there are ways to do that without having to essentially message a sex worker or put on panties and a chastity cage. This humiliation tactic to put certain men "in their place" is rooted in racial hierarchical thinking and puts men of certain races or nationalities ahead of others. More importantly, no one is having the discussion of using sex toys in bed to spice up the love life, or talking about using bigger dildos and vibrators to improve the experience. All of the discussions of sexual pleasure in the bedroom revolve the size of the male anatomy in question. This is beyond foolish when you listen to women who have said that not only does size not matter when your sexually proficient, but women also point out that bigger penises can often hurt when engaging in vaginal and other forms of intercourse. It matters far more that you know what you're doing in bed and have honest conversations about what both partners need, but mainly what the women needs, to have a good time in bed. If that means breath play, withholding masturbation, use of dildos, butt plugs, anal beads or anything else. Jumping straight to sex with another person and withholding sex for your primary partner is obviously not the solution. Especially not locking them away in a cage and having them constantly wear women's panties, even at work of all places. Stories like this remind me why good writing matters and why bad writing will always be pushed aside for better material. This story, with all due respect, is the type of bad writing that won't stand the test of time....... "
