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A life unraveled

"Damn this story line had me hooked from the word go💯I love the character Marvin ❤️ his virtue's, his loyalty it can even make you believe pure love is their though hard to find. Marvin's journey was not easy his mother's neglect..., his brothers hate but he had his sister's love. Along the way he found Mulenga one could her his destiny helper 🥰she gave a chance one the world denied him and she gave him something precious a son. And finally he found Audrey his one true love 🥰 ❤️ one could say fatal attraction ❤️things moved fast but I didn't doubt them.....she seemed surreal but she was real ❣️💍🌎"

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Beautiful

"Enjoying the story you're indeed a good writer ❤"

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Beautiful

"Like the story line"

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Mulenga

"Okay now I want a mulenga for a bestie 😅"

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A life unraveled

"Let the story begin can’t wait"

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