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Amazing

"What an amazing short story and an interesting look into the legends and mythology of another country. The idea of a huge white fox running across the sky with sparks from its tail creating one of the wonders of the natural world is actually a really great way to look at it. So fascinating to learn about the stories that get passed down through the years. Another great story. Thank you."

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Enjoyed

"Thank you for a lovely story. Was just the little pick me up I needed to get the grey mood from off my shoulders. Totally engrossed in the story this last couple hours flew by. "

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Fun read!

"Overall, it was a fun read, and I really enjoyed it! The only thing that bothered me slightly were the Finnish typos. It is just something to keep in mind in case you ever do a round of editing (assuming you were going for traditional Finnish names like Väinämöinen and Väinö, rather than putting your own unique twist on them!). But I totally get it; English is my fourth language, so I completely understand the struggle! lol"

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