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Lilbit1976

"Love this book. "

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The Wolf Queen

"Very well written story! I like that you chose to set it in the far past, kept my attention from start to finish. I usually don’t care for the happily ever after endings however I was hoping for it with them! Very good 🙃"

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The wolf queen

"I like how they don't have soul mates but are allowed to fall in love"

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Awesome

"Honestly loved the story. It has been a while since a book on inkitt has truly captured my attention. The plot kept me entranced and wanting more. Only issue was the change of scenes was a bit confusing. Great work!"

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Great plot

"It would be wonderful if there is a line or smthing to marks the change of place or time"

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Hard to follow at times

"Good plot, it was just hard to follow at times. The quick jumps from one place or moment to another had me rereading and pausing a lot to understand what was going on. "

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Needs work

"This could be a great story, but the bulk of it remains to be written. The dialogue and change of scenes is to choppy and disjointed. The story would benefit from a detailed outline as a guide to editing."

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Great start horrible follow through and ending

"Just wasted hours reading this"

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