Review

"This is my first time reviewing a story and also the first time reading a fanfic, so someone recommended me your story. first of all hats off for your efforts. Descriptions and dialogues were good. That bucky scene was very cool. About the story I felt that in places of Chapter 2 and Chapter 3 there should have been more depth, more story. You have put Gravik in a place where he has already achieved, i felt it would be fun to read how he achieved those. For part 2 i suggest you to explain Gravik's past. Everything else was fine to me. So overall Secret Invasion The First Fracture was a good start."