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Fastpaced and well rounded

"Well written characters, I like the first person narration. Gives us access to the mind of John as he evolves during the story. The World building is quite clever and the social criticism of ours is spot on without being heavy. I al definitely moving onward to part two."

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Truly emotional

"Lovely writing it transported ones imagination to picture your descriptions of each place, in that time, in which John travelled/existed. Thank you for a well crafted story.☺️"

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