What is your opinion?
Brenda
"I am truly enjoying Kingdom Tales. Detailed descriptions of infrastructure of early days, battles, history of the start of economy as we know it. And put together in a wonderful tale of friendship and growth, loyalty and love. Well done to the author. "
An improvement
"The story is more focused here than it was in the prequel which is a great improvement. I liked how the characters continued to grow and what paths they took this time. I especially liked how Lillian's character developed the most, However, I keep seeing them as teenagers rather than 10 year olds, I know that it's pointed out that they've matured fast, especially the prince and it makes sense that he has to mature fast since he's preparing to be king, but I still think their ages can be upped a bit, maybe 13 or 14 if you still want them to be young. There's also still a problem with grammar, for example there has to be a comma instead of a period after someone says something, and there are other things like typos and tense changes.. There is good improvement in the story, but I think grammar is the biggest that needs to be worked on."
