Inkitt
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"That was a very interesting story. It details so much of how our emotional and mental state can be affected by different treatments. What he thought he wanted was flipped around to show him that the way to get there or the way he did things to get the obedient wife was a total loss and the worst part of it being an innocent child to not receive the love and nurturing that a child deserves from their mother.. I'm sure if there was a part two of the Son growing older and taking over he would be ruthless more so than even his grandfather not receiving the gentleness and care during his adolescence.. "

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