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Fantastic from beginning to end!

"Great story, hooks you from the very start. Hard to put down. Recommend to everyone. "

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Til Kingdom Come

"I was originally going to wait until I finished this book before leaving a review, but there’s absolutely no way I can wait that long. Viv is already one of my favorite authors on this app, and I’ve read every single one of her stories, but this one has officially become my favorite. By far. A huge part of that is Santo. I’m not even exaggerating when I say he’s the sexiest, most charming, most swoon-worthy book boyfriend I’ve ever read. He’s genuinely my favorite male lead from any book, ever. Ever. I’m completely obsessed with him. I am, in fact, a proud Santo simp. I could probably write an entire review just talking about him, but both Viv and this story deserve so much more than that. I’ll start by saying that the writing is incredible, which honestly comes as no surprise if you’ve read any of her other books. I also love that the characters have italian roots (being a mafia trope and all is obvious haha). It hits close to home and makes this story feel even more special to me. And I have to give Viv so much credit for the way she writes emotions, especially Santo’s. There’s something almost poetic about the way he expresses himself (and endearing). He completely stole my heart. Also... can we please talk about the spicy scenes? Good Lord. They are ridiculously hot, but what I love even more is that they never feel like they’re there just for the sake of it. They only highlight the incredible chemistry Santo and Fiorella already have. Their connection is just as strong outside the bedroom as it is in it, and that’s what makes every moment between them so addictive to read. I’m so invested in these two, and I honestly can’t wait to see where their story goes next. If you’re reading reviews trying to decide whether this book is worth your time, stop thinking and just start reading. You won’t regret it. And while you’re at it, read literally anything Viv has written. Every single one has been amazing. I’ll stop here before this turns into even more of a love letter than it already has. I can’t wait to see how this story ends, even though I already know I’m going to miss these characters like crazy. Then again, I can always read it all over again."

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Hot AF

"Hooked to this story & how & oh I want a Santo for me please! "

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perdi

"I love it!"

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Love

"Please tell me there is a part two (2) to this story. "

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Till Kingdom come

" The author did a wonderful job creating a compelling story with an engaging plot. The perfect blend of humor, love, and passion made it an enjoyable and read. Can't wait for the next update🙂"

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Great story

"So far im loving this story can't wait to see where it goes. "

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I like it since I’ve been wanting to write a story of not myself. It’s really inspired me how to write and it’s kind of easy-going and not complicated to read a kind of love it. so keep up the good work and I cannot wait to finish.

"I like it. It’s pretty good and I like about how easy it is to weed and it doesn’t make you bored of it and there’s no one I can recommend it too because I’m the only one from my friends who loves dark moments and I give the rating a fight because I love it’s pretty."

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Till kingdom come

"Good story lines, I love the suspense and the spice. "

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Really good

"Love the story!!! Beautifully written. I love a gangster being soft for his woman. I love the story line "

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Great Mafia Romance!

"I love this author! Great writing style. Interesting plot and mafia boss love story. Love the chemistry between the male and female lead characters. "

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I love the book. It's worth reading. Such a nice and wonderful story. Keep it up. 10/10 minus nothing.

"I love the book 📖. So nice and worth reading. The story line, the spellings and punctuations is giving. 10/10 minus nothing."

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Definitely Worth The Wait 🙌🏼

"I AM LOVING THIS CHEMISTRY BETWEEN THEM!!!! "

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Soft yet controlled

"These mysteriously wicked male characters are a refreshing change. Love the evolving chemistry between Santo and Ella. "

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Thy kingdom come...thy will be my undoing 🔥🫶🏾

"What a dynamic start to a romantic suspense novel - bring on the next chapters!!️🫸🏾🫷🏾🙌🏾🫶🏾"

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It's Getting Intense

"The heat, the lust, wide eyes, rapid breathing...it's almost too much! 🔥 But I'll take it!! 😉"

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Great as always

"MORE OF THIS!!! This is the best one by FAR! I wish all of the books were available in this app..."

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Asu

"The plot is good. I have read the author's otel books. I like her style. "

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another great book

"js another amazing story i js love ur writing style can't wait for u to finish"

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Never disappointed

"I am always happy with Vivian Wren's work. I've followed her to Galetea and only read her there because she's the only one I would bother to spend my points on. Her writing is always spicy, snappy, sexy, and sassy. It hist every button for me, and this story is no exception. Primo stuff every time."

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