What is your opinion?
Needs work
"The story has a lot of characters and somewhat loses place of whats happening. There's a little mistakes detected in the names of the characters. The forced sex scenes and rape aren't at all accepted, seems that the main character, Arianna, doesn't have a saying on the man she learns to love. I'm curios to know if this story is the same that is on amazon for sale "ONE NIGHT WITH THE BILLIONAIRE: PART 1 &2, TESSY CHRIS (Autor), AMAZON.COM (Editor)"? And if it is, why the Inkitt version isn't complete? Keep up with good work. Best regards"
One night with Mr. Billionaire
"The plot could be interesting if it was written correctly, the constant errors and changes of tense make it very annoying to read. I hope she finds a good copywriter or improves in her writing so she can express herself adequately. Looks like a beginners draft, I wish her good luck to continue growing. About the story, I lost interest the moment he rapes her. I don ́t like romances where characters that are raped by the other main character get a "HEA" with them as if rape was something permissible and acceptable and not the abuse it is. "
