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Enticing Story

"This story had many ebbs & flows which held the reader's imagination. My main question while reading was, Why wasn't Ava more assertive with Noah to prevent the physical abuses? Sometimes art mirrors Life!! A good plot by the writer. Thank you for sharing your writing skills with us. Good job Ms. Moris."

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