What is your opinion?
No need to change the title
"I liked the story Well written "
This is honestly the best smutty novel I’ve read in a long time. I feel like I’ve been searching for exactly this kind of story, and it finally delivered everything I wanted. The writing is addictive, the chemistry is insane, and the author is absolutely superb at pulling you into the story. I’m completely hooked and now just dying for the update of the next chapter — the wait is torture in the best way possible 😭✨
"This is honestly the best smutty novel I’ve read in a long time. I feel like I’ve been searching for exactly this kind of story, and it finally delivered everything I wanted. The writing is addictive, the chemistry is insane, and the author is absolutely superb at pulling you into the story. I’m completely hooked and now just dying for the update of the next chapter — the wait is torture in the best way possible 😭✨"
Too much metaphors comparison 👎🏼
"Every line is compared with metaphors It is too distracting I can't even focus on the story and dialogues "