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The Child Of The Eclipse : Marven's Adventure

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Summary

Born during a rare eclipse, Marvin was never gonna have a normal life. In a quiet village where secrets are everywhere, he dreams of things way past the beach. But fate has its own ideas. Rumors of an old prophecy, unseen eyes watching from the shadows-- Marvin's adventure starts quietly, heading toward something way bigger than he ever thought.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
hzaid553
Status
20d ago
Chapters
39
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Marvelous signs

The scream tore through the night, sending a ripple of panic across the hillside village. Arthus felt it pass through him before he understood it, before he realized his feet were carrying him back and forth across the wooden floor. His breath stayed shallow, his heart pounding so hard it felt unmoored, as if it might break free. Elena’s cries had grown sharper as the hours dragged on, each one tightening the walls around him until the house itself seemed to close in. Another scream followed, and his hands clenched at his sides. Artien stood near the hearth, his usual calm stretched thin. Firelight carved deep shadows across his face, exposing a paleness he could not hide. “Do not worry, Arthus,” he said, steadying his voice with effort. “Mally is with her. She has brought more children into this world than either of us can count. She has never failed. Elena is in safe hands.”

Arthus nodded, though the motion felt hollow. He wanted to believe him and tried to hold on to the reassurance, but fear refused to loosen its grip. “I know,” he said, his voice rough. “But hearing her like this.” He shook his head. “It’s like a knife turning in my gut.”

Artien didn’t argue. He stepped closer and rested a hand on Arthus’s shoulder, its weight steadying him.Another cry rose from the back room, louder than the last. Arthus staggered and pressed his hands to his head, as if he could push the sound away. It didn’t help. Elena’s pain filled the house, sharp and relentless.

“I don’t know how much longer I can hold myself together,” he muttered.

Beyond the house, the village had gathered under a sky that seemed wrong. Moonlight had thinned to a muted silver as a shadow crept across the moon. Above the fields and dirt paths, the moon hung vast and dark, transforming everything that looked ordinary by day. Children clung to their parents. Voices dropped into uneasy murmurs. Even those who dismissed the old tales found themselves staring upward, unsettled by the shifting light.

For generations, nothing remarkable had ever happened in this village. No one standing there understood that tonight would change that. The elder stepped forward, white hair stirring in the faint wind. When he raised his hands, his voice carried farther than it should have. “A child will be born this night,” he said, his voice unsteady despite its reach. “A child marked by the eclipse. The shadow is his cradle. He will either hold back the coming dark or become its vessel. Whether he saves us or tests us, only time will tell.”

The crowd went quiet.

Back in the house, Arthus heard none of it. His world had narrowed to the sounds coming from the back room and the fear threatening to pull him apart. He and Elena had waited years for this moment. They had never wanted wealth or status. Their life was steady, neither rich nor poor, but they had enough to live with dignity. What they wanted was simple: a child to love, a family of their own. Arthus came from a line of traders who had dealt with the Santorian royals for generations. The Santorians ruled sea and land alike, their influence stretching across distant islands and foreign ports. Their ships were unmistakable, deep navy sails marked with golden suns. Through that trade, Arthus had built a reliable life, if unremarkable. Enough to eat. Enough to stand without shame.

He and Elena had imagined a son who would one day learn the trade, travel the seas, and carry the family name forward.

The years had tested that hope.

They waited. They hoped. They came close to surrendering that hope. Then Elena became pregnant.

She was older now, and childbirth showed little mercy to age. Another scream cut through the house. Arthus covered his face, his shoulders trembling.

“Arthus,” Artien said. “You have to stay strong. She needs you. Your child needs you.”

“My child,” Arthus repeated, the words fragile and unfamiliar.

The next cry came sharp and sudden, and then everything went silent. The silence pressed down hard.

“Elena?” Arthus whispered.

No answer came. His heart lurched.

“Elena!”

Then, faint and unsteady, a new sound broke through a baby’s cry.

Arthus froze, caught between relief and disbelief. Artien stared at him, afraid to move.

The cry came again. The door opened.

Mally stepped out, exhaustion etched into her face, relief shining in her eyes. “Congratulations, Arthus,” she said. “It’s a boy.”

The sound that escaped him was half laugh and half sob. He covered his mouth as tears spilled freely. “A son,” he breathed.

Artien pulled him into a tight embrace. “You did it,” he said, his own voice breaking. The elder appeared in the doorway then, framed by the silver glow beyond, as though the night itself had placed him there. Moments later, Mally returned carrying a small bundle wrapped in cloth. “He’s healthy,” she said. As she transferred the baby into Arthus’s arms, the cloth shifted, revealing his left shoulder. There, against his skin, was a birthmark, the deep purple of a storm cloud, shaped like a tiny, perfect crescent moon.

Arthus cradled the child in his arms. The warmth settled through him, easing something he hadn’t realized was breaking apart. He studied the tiny face, the clenched fists, the blinking eyes adjusting to the world. His thumb brushed the mark. It felt like ordinary skin.

“Elena wants to see him,” Mally said.

Elena lay pale but smiling, her strength spent. “Bring him here,” she said.

Arthus moved to her side. She brushed the baby’s cheek with trembling fingers. “Marvin,” she whispered. “His name is Marvin.”

The elder rested his hand lightly against the child’s forehead. “Born beneath the shadowed moon,” he said. Then he added, almost to himself, “If the old stories mean anything, this child will not pass through the world unnoticed.”

Joy surged through Arthus, almost painfully intense. He stepped outside and lifted Marvin for the village to see.

“His name is Marvin,” he called. “He is my son.”

Cheers erupted. Voices rose. Laughter and tears filled the night beneath the eclipsed sky. Marvin cried, unaware of the weight gathering around him, unaware of the path already being set in motion. Under that altered sky, his story began.


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This is a great opener!

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Thank you

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That...was...AMAZING!!!

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