Affecting.

"Honestly, poetry is not really my thing, and I don't have a lot of feedback that I can give. However, I thought that this was written powerfully in a way that affects the reader. Just don't mistake depressing for being the same as deep. You can have one without the other. This is only my opinion, and I don't want to sound like a know-it-all, but I think that you could do a lot more with stories and poems that teach something, that have some sort of uplifting message woven into them. Just a thought. But either way, I liked this."