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Great suspense
"I liked the pacing and tension of this story, which you kept at a relenting setting. It helped draw the reader in and want to continue. Nicely done. I had one issue with a plot point which was of the physical condition of Adrian and Luca who had both received serious injuries, yet injuries that seemingly disappeared with no explanation why. Other than that, great story. "
Interesting
"Truly mind blowing "
