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"I absolutely love this book. I was already completely happy with the first version, and honestly, I couldn’t imagine how it could possibly be made better, so I was a little nervous when I heard it was being rewritten. But this version added so much more depth and dimension, not only to the FMC but also to the MMCs. We got to see completely new sides of our characters, and it made the story feel so much richer and more interesting. I especially love the addition of Kiki as a character. She gives the FMC a space where she can feel comfortable, vulnerable, and genuinely loved. While our FMC had a version of that in the original, there was still a sense that she was lonely in her own way, and I really appreciate how this version addresses that. I also love that you retained her prickly characteristics instead of trying to soften or erase them. You gave her the space to be herself, grow, and really come into her own. I especially appreciate that you didn’t erase or minimize the hurt and pain caused by the MMCs’ actions. You allowed her to be vulnerable and, most importantly, validated in those feelings, while still giving the male characters the opportunity to express themselves, explain their actions, and show their own perspectives. That balance made the characters feel so much more real and layered. It felt like everyone was given room to be complicated, flawed, and human without taking away from anyone else’s experience. Overall, I absolutely loved this version and cannot wait for the second book—and hopefully many more! Thank you so much for giving us this story and these characters. ❤️"

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"Great story!! I am loving it!"

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Great read! And very easy to be drawn into

"So far so GOOD very easy read and i am absolutely loving this book"

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