Protecting Paisley

"I feel like the story would've benefited from having more background on each character. Kind of felt like some of the chapters were the same, like the story wasn't going anywhere? And maybe more explanation on why some of the characters did what they did? Or go in more depth on certain parts of the story? More details. Overall, it was a good story. I haven't read to many firefighter stories. So I'm glad this one is out there. "