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Glad you are updating frequently

"I am finding this difficult to put down. I like the way you release details a little at a time. I am not sure how I feel about the repetition of some ideas or phrases, but for someone going through emotional turmoil or a grieving process, it seems realistic, almost like a constant rehashing and reassurance as one goes though something over and over in his mind. The device works. Great story!"

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